Personal Statements and Anecdotes

I went to a lecture Friday night titled "Words Build Worlds."  The point of the talk was the power of speech in human relations. But more than the painful or uplifting power of what comes out of our mouth, I , as usual, was reminded of what has to flow from your pens or keyboards. (Besides, it is much easier for me to relate the inspirational talk I heard to what you should be doing than what I need to change in my own behavior.)

Every point the gifted speaker made, he made with a story, an anecdote, or parable. Realize that your personal statement's job is not to inspire others to change their ways, a most difficult task. Your job is much easier: your personal statement must help the reader see your world via the words you use. And the stories you tell.

If words build worlds,  stories are words on steroids. You cannot under-estimate their power as  you portray your world.  If you want the reader to believe you have leadership qualities,  reveal those qualities with a brief anecdote. If you want to introduce the reader to your compassionate side, tell a succinct story that demonstrates concern and caring. 

Stories and anecdotes in your personal statement will help you relate your world.